Thursday, April 30, 2009

Poem#2



Blinded by the gas
oh how it burns so much
never to see again no more
sites no more looking up in the sky
never to see whats going on its so loud
take this person life away for they will never
be able to protect and offend for themselves ever again

(choking i know there throats are burning)
no way of winning as the man scurries
off to find a dark corner to sit in
hoping that no one would try to kill him

the germans how dirty could they be to take
away every vision the eyes could ever see
never do they fight fair attacking with poison gas
smothering the humans only air.

the last thing these eyes witnessed were
the smokey looking air , alot of people
covering thier eyes, trying to fend for their lives
as my vision gets blurry it slowy but painfully
goes complety out it's like being in a room with lites
turned out never to be on ever again.

1 comment:

carrie said...

Good descriptions. I especially like the 3rd stanza and the last line of the 4th stanza.

Some small errors and missing the picture, so as is 31/35 points